Critique my poem please. "I Met You In My Dreams"?

You have the start of a really good poem. You need some rhyming, some rhythm. The last six lines were just great, but should have been seven lines...but really really outstanding. Instead of lifting your "head" lift your "face" and then something like "I reach out to hold you" and then "but you are no longer there. I think you could make this a special poem. If poetry is your pion you can make it work! Good luck to you! Also, keep the stanzas even and make them more uniform in word count. You go!! If you haven't studied poetry, it might do you justice to read the basics, because that might be all you need to become prolific in poetry!